Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Can one put Samsara into words? That sounds like a dare.

There are few things in the world of film that gets me quite as excited as the cinematic term, "70mm". Indeed, I have often judged, quite unfairly, a city's level of development and civility solely on the basis of whether or not it has an IMAX cinema. Harsh, I know, but then I am not a diplomat. Sadly, however, life (and I hasten to add the adjective, my, to the noun, life) is changing. All around the world, IMAX screens are closing, which is hardly surprising considering that we have become so complacent with ingesting low resolution imagery of an even poorer sound quality - we now listen to symphonies compressed into neat little binary codes, whereas IMAX still boasts 8-channels of individual, uncompressed sound. The Youtube Generation they call us, or perhaps that is what we call ourselves. Who, after all, boycotts Youtube?

To have found a documentary, then, shot entirely on 70mm in 25 countries has piqued my interest to say the least. And to have watched a clip from that film, albeit streamed through Vimeo on a tiny screen, was an experience not unlike watching Planet Earth for the first time. Samsara, it seems, follows a similar format to documentaries such as Bodysong (2003) and the Qatsi Trilogy; Koyaanisqatsi (1982), Powaqqatsi (1988) and Naqoyqatsi (2002). Though I find this format to be a welcome change from the sensationalist, and therefore popular, Michael-Moore-ish style of documentary filmmaking, it does require one to engage with the imagery more than perhaps any other style of filmmaking. To me, it reflects something of the silent era, particularly the Soviet approach of the 1920s - every image heavy-laden with commentary, allusion and symbolism.

"Can you put this video into words?" is the challenge posed by True Activist, a website dedicated to film news. It is a question few writers manage to shy away from, especially writers drawn to the subject of film. So, let's give it a bash.

The clip presents us with a process, one that defines us as a consumerist species. It starts with chickens being plucked up in a factory by a vehicle not unlike a small harvester. Cut to the chickens pouring into boxes, which are neatly stacked away into shelves from whence the chickens are killed, their intestines scraped out and their parts separated and packaged, all in some sweat shop populated by scores of purple-and-blue-clad factory workers. At a higher frame rate (slo-mo), we catch a glimpse of a pair of Mongolian-descended eyes peering over a mask, contemplating, we believe, everything. A few moments later, she senses the camera on her and her brief brush with her own humanity vanishes.

The clip transports us to a colossal turntable, where the udders of a great circle of cows are being sucked dry. Next, we see gargantuan gilts laying pinned down on their sides, each assigned ten or so piglets who suckle them. Inevitably, the film cuts to giant porcine carcasses hanging from a rail, moving from worker to worker as they are gutted and their innards removed and discarded..

In true Eisenstinian fashion, a remnant of Soviet-era technique, the film then offers a juxtaposition. We witness the life of the predator in time lapse, scavenging the spoils of the aforementioned processes, inside a Costco, which eerily resembles the factories from whence everything came. Pile upon pile of meat and dairy are placed on the conveyor belts that carry them to the cashiers, obese mall rats cram mouthful upon mouthful of junk down their throats, until the sequence ends with a shot of a man's belly being prepped for liposuction.

The film's message is in no way ambiguous. In fact, like the Soviet-era films, one might criticise its style for being too obvious and for underestimating its audience's intelligence. But the fact remains, though we suspected the circle of life in the 21st century to resemble something like this, my guess is that we never considered that it might be quite so inhumane. Never before have I seen human greed portrayed in such a frank, objective and brutally honest manner. One hopes that films such as these might change the world, but in reality we know that they appeal only to a niche market - intelligent films made for intelligent people - but the saddest fact of all is that no matter how intelligent its audience, every member of that audience is in some way guilty of the film's accusation. One might even go as far as to to say that the filmmakers themselves were driven to a great deal of introspection in the making of it.

Films such as Samsara play a very important role in archiving human history. They should shape it, but if we're honest, they only observe it. What we do with their observations is what really matters. One only wonders when our observations will lead to action.

Hanfred Rauch
www.hanfredrauch.com

Monday, August 19, 2013

Feedback for "The Shadow Guardians"

Well, there have been quite a few developments concerning "The Shadow Guardians" of late. I had been meaning to list it on The Black List for quite some time and so, about a month ago, I took the plunge. For the site to host the script, it's $20 a month and $50 to get a professional script reader to evaluate it, which is quite good considering that some script readers will charge you from $600 for their wisdom.

I was very happy with the feedback I got from the anonymous reader. The script scored 6/10, which would seem disappointing (and it was), but after some reflection and marinating in the reader's comments, it made complete sense. I am not a professional scriptwriter (yet), especially not one experienced in writing action sequences, with which "The Shadow Guardians" is peppered. A helpful comment from the reader was that my descriptions read more like prose. One does attempt to put a personal stamp on one's work, but in this case, I realised that I would have to adapt my screenwriting style to fit into the Hollywood mold more, that is, to write in a staccato style and above all, to write sparsely. The trouble with "The Shadow Guardians" is that the story is too rich for a breakthrough screenplay. In reality, this would amount to a 3-hour film, which is entirely what I set out to do, but as the reader pointed out, it is very unlikely that any studio would drop $200 million on a tent pole concept by a newbie.

My conclusion is that I must resort to that ever-haunting virtue that emphatically describes my screenwriting career right now - patience. The reader was very complimentary of the story, which was my primary focus, but when all is said and done, this is not the type of story that finds its way onto the silver screen without an existing fan base in another medium. "The Shadow Guardians" was always meant to be a book trilogy - perhaps it only took this detour to make that clear.

On that note, I also Googled the name (which has been registered with both WGA and The United States Copyright Office, by the way) and it turns out that "The Shadow Guardians" is already a book series, albeit a supernatural romance series featuring werewolves and damsels. Oh well, back to the drawing board, as they say. It will be back, even if it does become a book and takes another name.

Hanfred Rauch